Poëzie en verhalen

Discussie in 'Offtopic' gestart door Emielio500, 21 apr 2014.

  1. Emielio500

    Emielio500 Sub-Adult

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    Misschien wel leuk om hier een topic voor zelfgeschreven gedichten en verhalen van te maken! Ik zag al een erg mooi gedicht van Ninthdegreeburn staan, dus ik dacht: waarom maken we er niet gewoon een thread voor aan? Ik zal beginnen:


    The fires of passion, spun out of control
    The death throes of faith bringing void to the whole
    The embers that brighten and cool down at will
    Fear shakes their thoughts while they shiver, stand still

    When the red moon comes, the world will grow dark
    The hunters come out, and the prey will be marked
    Stinger stands upright; claws raised for the kill
    The hunters will wait, they rely on their skill

    The mountains will roar and the winds will destroy
    Blood fills the oceans, the vessels be toys
    Running and screaming, at nature's whims
    Life shall be ended and sunlight shall dim

    Lesser than mortals, or greater for that
    The small ones will live, and conquer their death
    Life shall evolve and darkness shall fade
    The future looks bright and a world shall be made

    Devoid of corruption
    And anguish, and thoughts
    Devoid of despair
    No cries and no laughs

    And all the while, we shall ever live on
    In worlds beyond time, when our space will be gone

    Capable of nothing but love


    ~ Emiel Vrolijk, 10 februari 2014
     
  2. Emielio500

    Emielio500 Sub-Adult

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    Nog maar één dan, improvisatie van zojuist:

    I shall take up my bow, and then aim and set loose
    Passionate arrow, to pierce distant heart
    To set it ablaze with the fire of longing
    Yet risen from ashes, toward a new start

    The shadow of self has yet risen from death
    Emptiness filled with a hope thought long lost
    Towering cries, being stilled by a smile
    Trying to gain distant heart at all cost

    Willingly providing a comforting ear
    Marvelling wonder at the being that is
    Eyes nearly blinded by light shining bright
    Exuberant life, spanning depth of abyss

    Mere distant stranger, yet closing in quick
    Regarded as known, being trusted with all
    The sparkle of doubt shall be crushed beneath heel
    And the path be made clear, insecurity’s fall

    Not wishing to scare and not wishing to harm
    Don’t want to impose, do not raise the alarm
    A being yet different from all who preceded
    Her being providing the comfort so needed

    I turn mournful eye toward darkening sky
    While memories haunt me in passing
    But there comes the sun and it pierces the clouds
    With promise of hope, everlasting..

    Nothing eternal, but healing shall help
    To recover from heart that was stabbed
    The walls coming down ‘round the edge of my soul
    And the creature be shown, opportunity grabbed

    To revel in the light of her being.


    ~ Emiel Vrolijk, 22 april 2014, 14:15
     
  3. maxie

    maxie Sub-Adult

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    Emiel, zet je hier muziek op ?
     
  4. NDB

    NDB Adult Erelid

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    Dat heb je vaker gedaan schat ik zo in :smile:

    Maareh, gedicht? Ik?
     

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